zed 110 Report post Posted May 15, 2015 (edited) Sorry removed the post. Used for uni Edited May 15, 2017 by zed Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
developer 0 Report post Posted May 16, 2015 :-*. Why is Dan, zed ?, he seem to be a good man . Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
kenjy 1 Report post Posted May 18, 2015 You jump too fast from one thing to the next and it's making the story feel flat. Also, Your English could use some improvement. Better luck next time Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
Null 2 Report post Posted May 18, 2015 Hehe, nice to see this kind of thing here for a change. Keep it coming! Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
PeterDragon 0 Report post Posted May 21, 2015 loved it Share this post Link to post Share on other sites
zed 110 Report post Posted February 11, 2017 Holly lol quit playing games for a very long time for my issues and came back to check my old posts found this one , i will make part two and post it Share this post Link to post Share on other sites